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Post by Severus on Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:42 am

current:

Working on my brushing skills, so everything but the render and text is me using the brush tool. Also tried to keep flow reasonable.



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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Blazer on Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:53 am

That's actually pretty sweet. His clothes do tend to blend in with the background but it's still a good idea. The name kinda sticks out from it..could just be me though lol.

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:58 pm

Blazer wrote:That's actually pretty sweet. His clothes do tend to blend in with the background but it's still a good idea. The name kinda sticks out from it..could just be me though lol.

yeah text really isn't my strong suit

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Sun Feb 03, 2013 3:47 am

double post for update

newest one Smile
this is me trying to use a disintegration like effect

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by MrYoSo901 on Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:21 am

Severus wrote:current:
tried using my Disintegration effect.


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awesome effects
crappy text
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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Sun Feb 03, 2013 4:38 pm

MrYoSo901 wrote:
awesome effects
crappy text

what would you suggest to do?

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Safko on Sun Feb 03, 2013 4:51 pm

You could try removing the text as a whole. It's better to have a textless tag than have the text ruin it n.n

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Blazer on Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:53 pm

Severus wrote:
MrYoSo901 wrote:
awesome effects
crappy text

what would you suggest to do?

Consult your fellow members or viceroys! Very Happy
Or have someone else play around with text if you want it that bad. Then they can explain what they did if you like it ^.^

I think changing the transparency, adding the desintegration effect, and changing the style of the text (not necessarily font) might help make it blend.

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by MrYoSo901 on Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:21 pm



this
Safko wrote:You could try removing the text as a whole. It's better to have a textless tag than have the text ruin it n.n

or choose a less eye catching font and apply the effect that you did on the render...



don't really know i've had trouble with texts too.
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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:01 am

MrYoSo901 wrote:

this
Safko wrote:You could try removing the text as a whole. It's better to have a textless tag than have the text ruin it n.n

or choose a less eye catching font and apply the effect that you did on the render...
don't really know i've had trouble with texts too.

here is my attempt


without text

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Blazer on Mon Feb 04, 2013 3:52 am

The text looks blotchy imo. Perhaps have the disintegration effect be angled the same as the character?

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:32 am

update with new sigs

#1

#2

#3

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Blazer on Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:58 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9e-ZM-NXKOU

They look very nice!
2 and 3 are my favorite

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Crazy Potato on Sun Feb 10, 2013 11:42 am

3 is the best. Those eyes pop out at you and the way is looks seems great to me.

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by MrYoSo901 on Sun Feb 10, 2013 11:45 am

Severus wrote:update with new sigs

#1

#2

#3


yep definitely 3. The shape is a little bit awkward though.
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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:22 pm

MrYoSo901 wrote:
Severus wrote:update with new sigs

#3


yep definitely 3. The shape is a little bit awkward though.

mind saying how so?

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by MrYoSo901 on Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:45 pm

Severus wrote:
MrYoSo901 wrote:
Severus wrote:update with new sigs

#3


yep definitely 3. The shape is a little bit awkward though.

mind saying how so?

width too small, height too tall compared to normal sigs. It actually looks like a thumbnail of a wallpaper or something.
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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Safko on Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:48 pm

Kind of clustered but it looks good (:

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:59 pm

MrYoSo901 wrote:
Severus wrote:
MrYoSo901 wrote:
Severus wrote:update with new sigs

#3


yep definitely 3. The shape is a little bit awkward though.

mind saying how so?

width too small, height too tall compared to normal sigs. It actually looks like a thumbnail of a wallpaper or something.

Ahh ok, ill keep that in mind next time.

Safko wrote:Kind of clustered but it looks good (:

thanks!

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Blazer on Sun Feb 10, 2013 6:26 pm

The bottom right symbol is what I see as trippy lol. But yeah, still great works.
I really like the style you've been using lately too. It's very cool.

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Tue Feb 26, 2013 2:40 am

working in proportions that strict sites make people stay in. just to test myself in working in a small area.

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by +RoRo on Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:12 am

Try working on flow and depth. Make the fractals, c4d's and other vectors go in the same direction as the render itself. As for depth, sharpen the focal and blur appropriate areas in the background Smile

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by MrYoSo901 on Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:44 am

+RoRo wrote:Try working on flow and depth. Make the fractals, c4d's and other vectors go in the same direction as the render itself. As for depth, sharpen the focal and blur appropriate areas in the background Smile

Hope this CnC was helpful!


this.

the flow was intersecting all over the place. that and theres a green bar thingy on the right side thats a bit distracting.
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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Severus on Sat Mar 02, 2013 4:04 am

New One,

Working on my brushing skills, so everything but the render and text is me using the brush tool. Also tried to keep flow reasonable.



^I'm actually kinda proud of this one, i really like how it turned out.

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Re: Sev's C&C thread

Post by Deathfire123 on Sat Mar 02, 2013 5:48 am

Severus wrote:New One,

Working on my brushing skills, so everything but the render and text is me using the brush tool. Also tried to keep flow reasonable.



^I'm actually kinda proud of this one, i really like how it turned out.

Love the render and effects. Text is a bit too bold, but other than that I like it. Maybe make it a few sizes smaller, that would be my only suggestion
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